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She was on her knees... Sobbing... Sobbing so deeply that it hurt her chest. Her face was completely covered in tears, her vision was so blurred that she could barely see his outline. Him. He was standing right in front of her watching as she begged for him to explain what had happened.
He saw this pathetic creature before him... He had once held her in his arms as he told her that he loved her, and promised her the world. He had once looked into her eyes and seen nothing but pure undying love.
But then, just as quickly as he had brought her that happiness, the love she thought might never end, he took it away.
He looked at her, sitting there, blankly. He acted like they had never met, and he didn't even acknowledge the pain that he had caused her. He just sat there like a stone, saying not a word to her pleas.
She looked up at him, her eyes red, her face blotchy. She knew she wasn't going to get an answer. She got up, looked him in the eyes, and saw nothing. She suddenly felt cold. The love that she had once seen in his eyes was gone. A memory that, from his expression now, was hard to recall.
This was the end. All that they had gone through, all that they had said, was gone.
She wished at this point that she could be like him, able to forget everything without a second thought, without any pain whatsoever.
She looked down, turned around, stood up straight and walked away.
Kind of how I felt after a recent breakup..
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ShroudedHeart Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
wow im sorry
this is kinda how i felt when my girlfriend left me
it still hurts.
Rizwanisone Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2010
Thats exactly how i felt when she left me :( i wanted to be like her , like a stone with no feeling or emotion ..
Hypnotica37 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2009
:invisible:Thats sort of what i'm going through... but it seems so different. You don't want to believe that theyre gonna move on. but they always do. sometimes it's like they already moved on. or like you never even had them...:raincloud:
twilights-kiss Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2008
that's what I felt like when I broke up with a boyfriend because he cheated on me ='[
darknessisbeforeus Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2007
wow, that's exactly what i'm going thru like right now.
it means a lot
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